BrianK

//Big Topic: How does the society treat/view the religious minorities?//
Essential Question: =Is government's response to conscientious objectors fair in South Korea?=
 * Core definition of the "conscientious objectors": Those who deny to serve their required military duties for their religious beliefs

Unique audience

- my uncle who is a professor on religion
Feedback: - It should be " Is Korean government's response to conscientious objectors in South Korea fair? " - For the example on the first page, it would have been good if i had mentioned about the Pilgrim. - I have failed to mentioned the government's claim on this issue. It would have been a more objective paper, if I had mentioned the government's stance. - Most people in South think that alternative system is a easy way getting out of military service, however, - During the reign of Roh Moohyun and Kim Daejoong, the alternative system was viewed positively, but under the presidency of Lee Myung bak, it is viewed negatively. - Professor Ryu( my unique audience) personally believes that Korea will pass the law that allows the alternative system for the conscientious objectors in a near future, adapting the world trend. - It is right to inform people about the unfair treatments that were done to conscientious objectors in the prison, so that they have more clear understanding on ㅡ = = =Reading Plans and Sources=

-Conscientious Objector: the Study of Seventh-Day Adventist Church and Jehovah’s Witness by Donhwe Kim

-"Beliefs of Jehovah's Witnesses http://www.religionfacts.com/jehovahs_witnesses/

- Cahill, Eileen. "Conscientious objectors fight war against war." Korea Herald http://www2.gol.com/users/quakers/conscientious_objectors_fight_war.htm

- Carr, Bernadeane. "History of Jehovah's Witnesses. www.catholic.com/library/ History_of_the_Jehovah_Witnesesses.asp

-Chung, A-young. "Conscientious Objectors Call for Alternative Service." Korea Times http://wwrn.org/articles/12294

-"Jehovah’s Witnesses' Statement of Principles (1934)." http://www.holocaust-trc.org/Jletter.htm (accessed May 14, 2011).

-Kilner, Margaret K.. "Huguenots." Congregational Church, . http://www.orange-street-church.org/text/huguenot.htm

-Shin, Dongwook. "We're Not Put in Prison." Hankyoreh http://www2.gol.com/users/quakers/were_not_put_in_prison.htm

"The Death of Saint Peter." Martyr. http://stpeter.webhero.com/martyrdom-of-st-peter.htm